This is my DPS i used the negative to resemble the break up of the band, however i used the bright colour to show that there is a new beginning and that its all okay now. Also the green used was to keep the halloween theme used but it also shows envy, this is because the band had broken up.
Proofread it very carefully, straight away you can see that your first sentence is inaccurate. lead should begin with a capital L...
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